Reviews for Not Deserving Enough

Mark Joseph 2007-06-16 ch 1,	abuseI don't think he deserved the slap, all he did was dump her, get over it. Great story, good description. M Ripley
nostril raping drummer 2007-06-16 ch 1,	abusehahaha. i love how you built up to that ending. i'm not really sure if you meant it to be funny, but i got a good chuckle out of it.