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Devin-Jamie 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseWow. Powerful. Now, I'm going to comment on the poem before I read the note at the bottom, so you understand what at least one reader gets from the poem itself. It feels real and true and not something surreal that you've never felt. It's simple in a way, and I like that. Straight to the point. And, what's more, what's weird, is that, a few weeks ago, this might as well have been written by me. I'm the pyschologist of my friends- always, always there for anyone who needs me, wether I know them or like them, or not. And, even when I was going through tough times, I put all of them before myself. After a while, I felt like not a single person was bothering to even attempt to do the same for me. And all I really wanted was for someone to see what I was going through, without me having to wave around a white flag in their faces. Anyway, what I'm saying is that this is a good piece that people can relate to, and that I like it. You're a terrific author. Okay, now I've read the note. The poem doesn't sound like a self-pity party. It just sounds like you're acknoledging the truth about what's going on. If you didn't, you'd be hiding from yourself, you know? Anyway, here's my (superlong) review. -Devin
not sure yet 2007-10-16 ch 1,	abusethat sounds like depression, o i know it too well, heh, very expressive poem though and where else can you sound self pitying? good read
thePelican 2007-08-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is so good. No lie. Yes. I bet a lot of people can relate to what you have just written. Nicely done. Keep it up.
Seventh Chords 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abuseI could really identify myself with this. Lately I've just been so bogged down with work and schedules, and I must say it doesn't help to have all these emotions raging inside of me either, with my faith a little shaken from all this. But at least God promises never to leave us, and promises to give rest to us weary folk. I thought you did really well in bringing out your emotions here. Great job.
Mortifer Amor Phasmus 2007-06-16 ch 1,	abuseI think this is less self pity, and more wanting what everbody else. The curse of the strong is that they are too often scripted as supermen/women, and believed to be invulnerable. Good work!!
myheartbelongstosuperman 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow... I understand completely. Beautiful, beautiful job. Nowhere in this piece do you sound self-pitying, and that's a good thing-- the emotions behind this poem were perfectly understandable. Hang in there...
Kohnitz 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abusei really like this, actually. your writing has improved, miluv. :] not too much pity, but just enough to get the message through. kohnitz
kelsi bones 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abuseI like this a lot, mainly because I know exactly how this emotion feels, but also because it's well written. You express the feeling of being lost and tierd of everything well, without sounding like you want everyone to pity you. Great job =] Katt.xx

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