hehehe!
that reminds me of the time i was at a cottage with my friend and she had a GIANT lollypop.. and it was 2 in the morning and i wanted to sleep but she kept tackeling me and sitting on me.
lmao
great story! :)

It's kind of cute, but not much seems to happen. The writing, grammar, etc seem fine.

This was SO SWEET :D I loveth it -nodnod- I think you did a fantabulous job! Makes me wish this was a full-length story (just a suggestion?). In any case, wonderfully done :) Smart and quirky in its own way... You are a brilliant writer.

thi was funny.