i like this alot. very well put. sometimes we have to put up a face to make ourselves...well immune to the hurt you might say?

Sorrow

I like this.. the formatting is great.. and I love the ending.. very bittersweet piece... wonderfully done

I love these lines:

theres no emptiness in nothing

while nothing is empty

I like your style, abstract and meaningful.

Keep writing _

* ner *

Have you ever heard the song "How to fight lonlieness" by Wilco.

That's what this poem reminds me of. And being compared to Jeff Tweedy is a major compliment. Believe Me

I love it. *faves*

wow, i liked this a lot. my favorite part was the ending. nice work!

honestly one of the most depressing poems i have read by you

very selfless also

reminds me of a friend i have

Nice! I can tell your writing style has changed a little bit recently. I like the use of periods in the beginning line to make the commands more definite. Great write. Keep writing, k.

cool.. i like the little twist at the end..