Hehe. Fun story.
I was thinking the surprise could be both families sitting down together for Christmas dinner, but the moms making out is even more fun. :) lol

Okay, one thing is dreadfully unclear to me still. What did Alex do that destroyed Caden's image of him? Maybe he moved a bit fast, but he was drunk. Yet, as soon as Caden protests, Alex stops. Also, nowhere do we know what's going on in Alex's head. Maybe it's being a different age, or different cultural expectations, but I'm not sure what Alex did that was so, well, bad.

I love it :D I was holding my breathe half the time in anticipation. Thanks for the funny yet satisfying story!

WHAT??..what they saw?..oh no..you just make me wanted to know even more!!..
anyway love the story..loves the name Caden ..and Alex..hmm..my dream name..yah i know its sound weird..but i love the name in the summary so thats why i read your story and thank god its good and i absolutely loved it! awesome writing!

Yay! They're together! =D Finally xD I actually lost hope for a while, but -happydance- they're together (I'm on repeat-mode, so excuse me xD).

^_^ -favs story-

Heh, I totally imagined Bandy and Cade's moms making out in the dining room as the ending scene...
No clue why though seeing as they're supposed to totally hate each other and such. I love the way you ended it as though it's a blank for the reader to fill in.

This was a beautifully written story. It was dramatic but in a way that was believable (a story like this is surprisingly difficult to find). I also loved Bandy's silly expression of "Oh my garters."

This goes on my faves :]!

Lovely story,
-Nub

wow. you...**! ...iloveyou

I liked it, except the cliffhanger ending! But hey, maybe you'll explain that if you do the sequel (which i hope you do).

Congratulations on finishing the story :)

Aw, it was nice to read about more sweetness between Cade and Alex. Slightly angsty, but not really. :)
Cute.
And I would be interested in an epilogue or story off-shoot about James and Stetson. I'd definitely read it if you posted it.

AW ... sweet ending. I'm glad Caden apologized to Alex about the whole party thing, even though he did have a right to be a little upset, because I think he overreacted so . . . happy to see that.
Great story! Good job finishing it! :)

Almost at the end! It's good to read all the loose ends being tied up. What about James now? Oh well, I'm sure he'll find someone - 'cause Caden is Alex's.

Favorite chapter so far! Especially the first part Alex and Cade are adorable together.
"I am still in no mood to talk to a closeted ** who thinks putting his hands down my pants is the answer to our prayers." :)
And
"This must be a nightmare. I try to think of what I could possibly have eaten to have caused this travesty."

Good chapter. I LOVE the new summary - it's your best one yet! :)

Funny, "The only reason I'd paid attention at all was because I'd heard that you could interpret it in a ** way."

I didn't get this referrence - "'You should all have been expecting it after Jack Nicholson.'"

aw, that has to be one of the sweetest endings ever. Marshmellow kisses, what a great metaphor.

Good job with this story!

Aw.
Marshmallow kisses. yummy.
You're story makes me remeber and be all... "i remember when..."
Like, i rememebr when i toasted marshmallows at Hornsby trainstation using kebab sticks and a box of relaly long matches, and when i hugged someone, the stick cut the back of my throat.
Best afternoon ever, despite the blood.

*dances*
So, thankyou for an awesome story- really, it was cool.
And i now understand the title of the story! Hurrah!
You include cute details, like think sheeted tents, that make the story something very ... touchable. Or whatever.
Anyway, awesomeness.

- Sy