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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-16 ch 1,  | abuseAdorable poem. "To Afraid" should actually be "Too Afraid". ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Arafax 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. I liked to the two different viewpoints. Nice job. haha...the guy's point of view is good...I should know...lol ~Arafax~ |
| kloun doll 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abusewow, love is complicated.. I don't know why they're scared of losing something they don't have, I guess, it's interesting the way you put their view points about the same feeling. |
| sweets555 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseSweet kristie! there was a few typos and such, but it was great anyway. everything you write is always great...*is jealous* |
| Betsy Anne 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseYou might double-check your spelling and grammar, but it is cute. |
| x-SimplySam-x 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abusewow, that was deep...i really liked it though. Please continue to write! |
| HenneyBuggyBand 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abusecuute. but you dont need the life part, i think. the other parts stand very well on theri own, and thats what makes it powerful. good job. |
| Karma.Rose 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abusewhat a thrillingly original format!! i don't know if you got the idea from somewhere, but it's knew to me, and i think it's fantastic. love the poem, and like probably everyone, i can very much relate... i really liked this... good job. and well done on using a realistic male point of view. keep writing! stella |