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| Thomas Rex 2007-06-16 ch 1,  | abuseEssentially this has the beginning of great poetry in in: it is a splattering of ideas, images which are artistically synthesized; the words lose themselves in the meaning. Keep it up. |
| Cherry-Berry 2007-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, that's not all that bad! I love to write all the time go back to my site and pm me, I'll send ya a few poems and stories of my own if ya like. -CB |