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| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseI think it's really awesome with the figurative language throughout. Especially the title October, how it's basically the month before death covers earth. I wish I could read a few really long poems by you because your haikus really impress me. Maybe you should try it and let me know if you ever get around to it. |
| Ladybugg13 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseI love you. I love you. I love you. I read October. In pops picture of one mourner at a funeral. Ignore. Read next poem. Picture demands recognition. Ignore. Read next poem. Picture screams. I relent. I write a THIRD poem inspired by your work. Therefore, I love you. I haven't written this much in one sitting in months. |
| DiaRose 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Really saddening... really, really badly. I mean, in a good way, but still so strong. Love, ~Dia |
| Eagle Seance 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseI don't like blood... but I like your haiku! Who's the sole mourner though? Herself? |
| A Mysterious Stranger 2007-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abusePertiful. My favourite haiku of yours, actually. Muahaha. I bet you don't know who I am. Tis I, your guardian angel, aka your internet stalker. Turn to Christ, my child. Jesus loves you. Okay, so this is more of a collection of randomness than a review, but what the hell. S'what I do, remember? |
| Basara 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abusesweet... nice... |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseI love this piece. The last sentence was especially powerful and I really like your word choice. The imagery is really intense and it kind of reminds me of the dvd cover from The Black Dahlia. This piece was a work of genius. Brilliant job, as usual! This is going on my favorites. |
| Stella-Polaris 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseI think you should get the jist of what I'm thinking now lawl. But otherwise, WELL DONE! |
| Eva 2007-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! It's short but sweet perfect haiku topic, a little detail of a massive event. I know you like criticizum but i am afraid i have none to offer it is great! |