amazing, the imagery is nice, I could feel the emotions left in the poem.

I liked this poem, but I think the ending did not do it justice. It just didn't ...ring right, I guess. I dunno. It was a good poem, though. Interesting word choice and excellent descriptions.

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wow, that was really good. It flowed perfectly!

wow...what is 'it'? Really great poem, I love the imagery in it

This sounds alot like Buffy and Angel's love. No one wanted them to be together and when they finally were it all fell apart. Great poem!!


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I really love this. Really intense, simple and full of meaning... Great job!! ;)
I hope you'll write something again soon!!

Egad this is awesome!

It's just as intense as your writing style is.
I really wanna know what "it" is though. I suppose that's for my imagination.

I can't find a flaw (once again)...though, I'm not good at analyzing poems or anything. I just read them and plagiarize...err, get inspired!