Great start!

I support Hannah/anyone-that-isn't-Adam.

Hell to the no! GET OUT, HANNAH!! Hell, I'd rather her be with the rogue. Actually, that's the pairing I really want, but I went to your site and saw the sequel that said he was dead. That makes me sad. So anyway, I support Hannah/a-werewolf-that-ISN'T-an-asshole.

Wow... It's really, really weird to read this while listening to Owl City. O.o

this is a WHOLE LOT better than 'A Quick Bite'. The story made sense (for a supernatural one)and there was character development. It wasn't too ridiculously fast-paced.

I love the Hannah/Adam tandem you've got going on . they're so right. I'm glad your writing has improved. :) I think you have wonderful, if cliched, plots but you just didn't execute it that well with the other fic I read from you. You didn't leave loose ends in this fic and the ending was nice and symbolic. Keep up the good work..

Now.. on to the sequel. :)

hannah is such a whore.

I really extra enjoyed this story. You don't even understand how happy I was to see this end so fantastically. Grand job :)

loved it, everything about this story! i know its probbly not the best review but its, 6:47am haaha you gotta understand lol cant wait to read the sequel :D

omg i was so rite, well the second time hehe. i first suspected it was Micheal but then i was like naw then i suspected Sean than Bam* i do the happy dance cuz i normally dont get the mystery person right in stories :D lol. sorry if i sounded kinda annoying hehe i love the story by the way!

woah reading this chapter was like watching part of a movie. I was tottaly entranced by it :)

I am so glad you have a sequel! This story has a definite, tidy conclusion, but there is a lot more in the lives of the other characters to explore.

*trounces off happily to the next novel*

Also, I will be paying your website a visit. Navigating through fifteen pages of romance stories in the supernatural section to find gems like these is killer. I'm not doing that again.

Oi! I *wish* my parents had got me a shotgun for my fourteenth birthday. They gave my brother a BB gun when he was around...eleven, I think...but he wasn't that interested. I smell gender discrimination somewhere. D^=

Of course, I'm on my university's rifle team, so maybe that makes things different. I actually know what I'm doing. I started when I was fourteen, too. It's actually a good age to get training. Whether or not you GIVE your kid a firearm of their own, I think safety education is important. If you let them handle a gun it loses its mystique. As long as you stress the responsibility and properly supervise them, you might have fewer accidents.

(This has been a great read, BTW. Wonderful, believable description of werewolf social dynamics. I'm crying for Jeffery! He may have been my favorite character.)

Fantastic story, a lot of descrisption makes me happy:) continue with the amazing writing and ideas and I am going to definitely read your stories

Oh, my god! i was actually right! it was sean! anyways, back to your story...love it :D

Great story, I wish I was here to see it start!