:( This is so terribly sad! OMG, I'm so very sorry that this is how you feel. I know how you feel, though, so I guess all of us girls are in the same boat.

So sad, but something you can really relate to. ^^

-toffeecakesxox.

aww thats so sad but sweet aswell

again something i myself have felt...towards a woman of course... yes i am a man proud of the fact that i do cry. you cannot be a man if you do not accept the inevitable... such as the fact that ill probably always be alone...

i digress...
its very hard for me to find an Angst writer that actually moves me ... you move me quite easily...because its so vivid as to awake old memories within... 5 of 5.

O, that's god... Really realistic too. I like it 8D.

:,( Ohh, im so sorry. Experiences do make for the best stories, though, don't they? It was really moving, i really felt her sadness. Excellent :)

I loved the whole concept. It's so cute and yet a perfectly depicted angsty teenage love story. There's just a slight problem in the second half of the story when I noticed you changed from present tense to past tense, but that's about it.

Thanks for the review! And, I hope to read more of your stories!
Isabella.x

It's a very sincere piece. I hope writing this was cathartic for you.

Aw! This is so sad! I think pretty much every girl can relate to it, though. Because every girl knows how it is it makes us want to keep reading. *Sigh* Boys can be so freakin' clueless sometimes...

i think it turned out good, i feel privileged that you let me read it first and hope whatever it is you went through if being resolved and if you want to talk you know where to find me!