Wow, that would be an interesting way to die. I'd hate to burn to death though. Pretty nice poem, and good descriptions. You made the images more tasteful than disturbing/disgusting. Great job! Very original.

It's a completely original poem, I'll give you that! What an odd topic for a poem! Anyway, great imagery.

In the first line, that should be "breathe," not "breath." That aside, well-done. :)
-Cristina