I like this piece. The form of it seems traditional and strong, and flows well with the theme. Some lovely vocabulary used :) On the... *counts*... 11th stanza, is it supposed to be four lines, or three? I think it'd flow better as four, to go with the rest of the poem. I think that's probably what it's meant to be, but fp was a little slow on the editting again. Hmm. Just a thought. Anyway, nice job! I'll stop wittering now :P xx