i love the last two lines.

i love your rhyming - its done very well.

this is clever and intriging.


I like it.

I don't know what to say about this, except that I really love it. [Added to favorites.]

Strong, stunning poetry. Flesh it out and make it longer and you will have powerful piece.

Wow. Beautiful.

"unseen strings for curled fingers
Pull the most where sadness lingers."

Too true.