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Thoughts about you
Wee-hoo
2007-07-26 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD that was so sweet I got this cozy feeling in my chest... weird
s1LeNtaNg3L
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this piece; however, I think it would flow a little better if you switched the words "were" and "you" around here "And then there were you again". Other than that it's wonderful :)
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