very good! Abigail reminds me of Hermione/you, fast thinking... I like how she caught the whole "Celia" thing... Really cute! I like the friendly chemistry between them...

wow... very interesting! I think it's cool to see a girl writing with a guy's perspective, just because it's pretty hard! keep it up. I think it sucks that Todd and Abigail aren't going to the same school...

I really liked this story, it kinda flows ya know. Nothing to adbrupt and everything fits well. It's really well written. Update soon

-Genesis F.T