Wow. Harsh, real incredible. I really like your poetry it grabs at sensitive points and pulls and yanks.

the Stranger in the moonlight

Oh wow. I love this [I don’t need a million regrets

It just takes one not to forget

What a waste I’ve become]

:)

Keep writing!

At least this poem showed signs that the narrator had hopes of finding happiness.

SirScott

Loved it - i love your writing style and the emotions behind your writing. I also liked the way you repeated ' i dont need a million regrets'.

i liked this one alot, very detailed and full of emotion . good job. . , your way better than me lol

*evanescence123*

very beautiful. nice work on this.