Reviews for If Love Was A Destination

Reviews For: If Love Was A Destination

RazorManic 2008-09-23 ch 1,	abuseI can't offer you anything but a job well done, most of the things are noticed are already stated by the others who reviewed. But anyways i liked the poem. Keep it up!
iTSALLD0WNHiLLFR0MHERE 2008-08-08 ch 1,	abuseTitle does not suck to me! I thought it was great and so is Fall Out Boy! (I read your Bio) But back to the poem...I liked it alot, I wouldnt change a thing if I was you. and your a fav! :)
Landcaster 2008-07-19 ch 1,	abuseThat was really beautiful. The imagery and description that you used was really awesome; there were so many lovely, poetic lines. And the ending was quite apt and sweet. You certainly have a way with words.
Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1,	abuseWow, really well written, words chosen with deep thought, its pulsing with emotion, no improvement needed, title is fine btw =]. Great poem, keep writing... and i'll keep reading! ~Lurid~
Lilyre and Livvyg 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good. I'm not entirely sure how the last two lines relate to the rest of the poem, but it's good nonetheless. Changes in rhyme scheme also kind of bother me, but it works with the poem and doesn't detract. Very well-written. May your pen never run out of ink! ~Livvyg
concerto49 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abuseHm, interesting, you switched tense half way, on purpose? Guess, nothing is a destination - I mean where do we stop? You have some interesting ideas really. Don't know what to say about them. Perhaps it's just different to what I'd imagine. "your hearts beat" - heart beats Anyhow. Cheers.
XsilentXescapeX 2007-07-28 ch 1,	abusegood descriptions. i liked it
H.L. Darlows 2007-07-24 ch 1,	abuseWell, as a previous reviewer said, the title isn't that bad (maybe a little...). I have enjoyed reading this. A wonderful message, well written. The rhyming was good, though a little weaker in some places. It does have a nice rhythm to it and I find it uplifting. Apologies I can't offer anything more constructive at the moment, so I'll just say: good work!
smile for the sunshine 2007-07-24 ch 1,	abuseAw, it was really sweet. I really liked it. The title didn't stink too bad. Some of my best poems have really stupid titles. Some have titles that don't have too much correlation with the poem. Well, they do but it's surprising how it ends. Anyways, I think it ended kinda short but it was really nice. I liked it. =]
Daughter of the Faeries 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseThe title isn't bad at all. The subtitle "..then I've embarked on an eternal journey" doesn't fit with the poem, though, because it uses first person while the entire poem refers to "you." Your rhyme scheme skipped around a bit, which threw me off a little, but it wasn't too disruptive to the poem. The last few stanzas were a little strange, however, because there wasn't any rhyme at all. Overall, though it was very good. I love the line "reaching for someone that's never been there." Keep writing! ~Daughter of the Faeries
Complications 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseI loved the title and that little summary underneath it was quite poetic on it's own. As for your poem, it melted my mushy heart (because I love good poetry). Thank you that was beautiful. the imagery was fantastic.
SilentxSoul 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abuseIts nice, but the rhyme pattern is rather odd. Its great though, and dont worry about the title. The importance is what it represents.

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