 WildDeamonChild 2007-06-19 . chapter 1Thats totally amazing! I'm almost sure you could write an amazing poem about any thought, or feeling. I love your poems because they are so raw, and to the point. They make you feel something. Like the other one I commented, it made you want to go out and explor and talk to the world. This one, you just want to give this girl a hug, and tell her she is very important. This girl sounds like a wonderful friend. |
 morethancarbon 2007-06-19 . chapter 1I can relate to this, I've become the "back up plans" for when my friends boyfriends are busy *rolls eyes*
I like the simplicity, but maybe you need to spice it up a bit, yah know? Throw in a some more verbs... |