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Reviews For: The Back Up Girl
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-03-22 . chapter 1
Wow. I liked this one too. Nice job.
Dragracingqueen 2007-07-18 . chapter 1
This is wicked great :) such a relatable poem. Keep up the great work! looking forward to reading your stories now ^_^
WildDeamonChild 2007-06-19 . chapter 1
Thats totally amazing! I'm almost sure you could write an amazing poem about any thought, or feeling. I love your poems because they are so raw, and to the point. They make you feel something. Like the other one I commented, it made you want to go out and explor and talk to the world. This one, you just want to give this girl a hug, and tell her she is very important. This girl sounds like a wonderful friend.
morethancarbon 2007-06-19 . chapter 1
I can relate to this, I've become the "back up plans" for when my friends boyfriends are busy *rolls eyes*

I like the simplicity, but maybe you need to spice it up a bit, yah know? Throw in a some more verbs...
Professional Dreamer 2007-06-18 . chapter 1
Wow. Really well written.
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