poor tortured you
The emotion is conveyed very heavily
Which is really good
Told straight out kind of style which I like

That was beautifuly written. Although i have yet to be in love so i cannot quite understand the feeling it was still awsome! xD

stunningly poignant. wonderfully written. may i have your autograph? :D

that is wonderful...i love how it is all one block of text as if spoken really fast and in a confused manner...i love it...i had that same problem as well...but i'm sure you will pull through...great showing emotion