got only one ting to say dude
story's frickin awesome. fullstop.
:D

wow. i loved it. i only stumbled upon it today and read the entire story every chance i got. it was really good. even though i kind of expected the ending you still made it seem unpredictable, you are a very talented writer. well now im off to start reading the sequel! =)

Passing out after screaming at random people? Lol fail

Wel...
I'm not sure what to say.
I could say I loved this story so much it made my heart explode, but at the same time i could say I hated it with every fiber of my being.
Hm.
I'll just stick to calling it a love/hate opinion.
And...my last thought...?
SCREW EDWARD CULLEN! I WANT VIPER!
: D
Thanks for posting and writing.

this is really haunting.. i mean this story is so beautiful that it ll stay with me forever.. Thank you.

Why do so many stories on Fictionpress have to have a sad ending? Anyways, this one was very well wrapped up. If I had been a romantic, I'd have cried. You're an amazing author. And thank god there's a sequel. I'm gonna go read it right now.

just curious how is this in the supernatural aria and why?

For the last chapter and a half I had a horrible lump in my throat knowing there was no happy ending and still hoping for one and because of that I can tell you that you are a wonderful writer. That you are so good at expressing the emotions of your characters that I had that horrible lump in my throat while reading your story and almost crying. So good job. But the next story I read by you I hope there is a happy ending! :)

thanks for posting this ill go read it

Omg the end is so heartbreaking ):

I really love this story! If I don't get to finish it tonight, def. tomorrow. It's really good.

that was great, really. i loved the ending because it was so real. i love the way you write and im really looking forward to the sequal!

Hmm...The title possibilities will vary depending on how you plan to write the sequel and the course of the plot. Since I have no such knowledge, here are some title suggestions based on different story lines:

If Raylin and Viper eventually get back together, try:

1. Flame

2. Loose Ends


If Raylin and Viper find new love interests, try:

Open Doors

If Raylin and Viper go on some type of "journey" to find themselves, since V's in England and R's on her own, maybe:

Mirrors

That's all I've got. Good luck and keep writing! :)

Well...I don't usually review because I don't have an account..?
But I really enjoyed the story even though..it did have somewhat of a sad ending...but things don't always work out in the end?
Haha. I look forward to the sequel!

*sigh* i liked that ending. it was very realistic. i can't wait for the sequal, but maybe you can make that one un-realistic and have viper and raylin together again. i do love having false hope that one day love stories will come true.

peace love happiness