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| see-the-way 2007-07-15 ch 4,  | abuseand lucas would be? |
| Jesuslightstheway 2007-07-05 ch 7, | abusewow keep it going God Bless |
| Susannah Simon 2007-06-29 ch 7, | abusei liked this one! kind of open ended at the end though. i want it to come to a final close! |
| Susannah Simon 2007-06-29 ch 6, | abusewhoa, Riley what are you doing?!?!?! Lucas is HOT! |
| Susannah Simon 2007-06-29 ch 2, | abusewhoa lucas is freaking me out that was kinda cold... ha whoa |
| writing.life.2.4 2007-06-29 ch 7, | abuseAH! sad endings... sadness in world... but i luv the story anyway! lol great job, cant wait for the new story! |
| Nightless Dreamer 2007-06-26 ch 7, | abuseda story happened a bit too fast, & u kept on using da wrong wrds or leaving out/adding sum, but still, gr8 story! ^^ (sorry 4 da criticism > |
| YoUr DaRk hEaRt 2007-06-24 ch 7, | abuseyou got that last part from project earth huh? that story is sad. i really liked this story. it really has alot of emotions that causes you to know that you have them too. i really liked it. don't stop writing stories! |
| Alix.Natalie 2007-06-23 ch 7, | abuseIt was alittle fast I guess...other than that, watch out because you often switch from 1st person narrative to 3rd person anrrative, and it's sometimes confusing. So watch out for those subjects! I think I already asked you this is another story, but do you have a beta? If not GET ONE! Not to sound rude or anything, so don't take it the wrong way, but it helps. Having a beta hepls. Trust me. IT just does. |
| Abigail Cathleen 2007-06-23 ch 7, | abuseughh. good chapter... good ending even if it is a bit rushed... |
| YoUr DaRk hEaRt 2007-06-23 ch 6, | abuseoh **! now what the hell! this is the most AWSOME chapter i have ever read! hey, do you think that you could write this chapter again but in zack's piont of view? |
| Alix.Natalie 2007-06-23 ch 6, | abuseOh My God! How could she! Riley is starting to get on my nerves, I know it's not really her fault and that ahe has too much pressure on herself right now, but, really, kissing another guy?!!? Keep writting! I'm looking forward to what Riley says to try and save herself. |
| Abigail Cathleen 2007-06-23 ch 6, | abuseWHAT? |
| Mantar 2007-06-22 ch 2, | abuseok interesting, well bed time. time to go. nice chapter. |
| Mantar 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseNice job. I thought the chap was good. dont make anybody cut themseves, thats just not nice. you probobly already wrote it though. poo. well onto the next one. |