touching and awesome =]
i love it =)

and lucas would be?

wow
keep it going

God Bless

i liked this one! kind of open ended at the end though. i want it to come to a final close!

whoa, Riley what are you doing?!?!?! Lucas is HOT!

whoa
lucas is freaking me out
that was kinda cold...
ha whoa

AH! sad endings... sadness in world... but i luv the story anyway! lol great job, cant wait for the new story!

da story happened a bit too fast, & u kept on using da wrong wrds or leaving out/adding sum, but still, gr8 story! ^^ (sorry 4 da criticism >

you got that last part from project earth huh? that story is sad. i really liked this story. it really has alot of emotions that causes you to know that you have them too. i really liked it. don't stop writing stories!

It was alittle fast I guess...other than that, watch out because you often switch from 1st person narrative to 3rd person anrrative, and it's sometimes confusing.

So watch out for those subjects! I think I already asked you this is another story, but do you have a beta? If not GET ONE! Not to sound rude or anything, so don't take it the wrong way, but it helps. Having a beta hepls. Trust me. IT just does.

ughh.

good chapter...

good ending even if it is a bit rushed...

oh shit! now what the hell! this is the most AWSOME chapter i have ever read! hey, do you think that you could write this chapter again but in zack's piont of view?

Oh My God! How could she! Riley is starting to get on my nerves, I know it's not really her fault and that ahe has too much pressure on herself right now, but, really, kissing another guy?!!?

Keep writting! I'm looking forward to what Riley says to try and save herself.

WHAT?

ok interesting, well bed time. time to go.

nice chapter.