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Vee;;` 2007-06-22 . chapter 1
AHH.
ANGSTEH.`

>3; You're so good with angst;
i'd never handle something like this.
I luff the beginning mostly`
HOPSCOTCH! C:

Ah ♥
aliasfan 2007-06-18 . chapter 1
"but your smile's okay
denial's okay
yeah,
you're okay
as long as your feet stay in the chalkdust lines
one number at a time"

I like that part. :) Reading that first paragraph gave me this sweet nastalgic feeling somehow. I guess 'cause of the whole hopscotch thing. ^^
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