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Vee;;` 2007-06-22 . chapter 1
I luff how even when
i don't get haallff of it,
it's still absolutely ♥!

not my favie
but its your usual level of l'awesome! C:
aliasfan 2007-06-18 . chapter 1
I love those last lines. Awesomage. When you're writing these, about life and everything, are you drawing them from your own personal experiences or making them up? Either way, it's great. ;D Oh, and I don't know if this is a typo, but should the line "so as long we're young" read "so as long as we're young"? It just didn't make sense the other way. >w
Dawn Gabriel 2007-06-18 . chapter 1
Different. The repetition was a compliment to the peice. The last few lines really pull it together. Good.
~Thursday
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