OMGUH.
I ...
don't even know what to say to this. :) I'd seen you around fanfictiondotnet once I think... and somehow I find you again today :D Except I hate reading what you write, because it's always so perfect that anything I might write is utter trash afterwards.
Bwah. Great awesome work. :)

AAHH

HOLEH CRAPPEH

BEST ONE YET ;D

Srsly like`
everythings so lifelike when you write
but this ones really YOU ♥

OH. MY. GOSH. I...was gonna quote one part...but then I wanted to quote the next part, and the one after that...when I realized I'd just be reposting the whole darn thing in my review. This was amazing! And I laugh because I completely agree with you. Last night I want to bed around 4 or 5, can't remember which. I've been staying up late, on the internet, playing videogames, doing random stuff. And I tell myself to go to bed because tomorrow has become today yet it still feels like today. XD Gosh I loved this! This is my favorite one you've posted on ficpress, though all of yours have been amazing. ::dies from your writing because it kills me, yet it keeps me alive::

What a disorienting, confused poem! It rather captures the feel of a nighttime awake and unable to sleep feel, though it didn't have enough of the "Oh god, why won't I fall asleep?" desperate feel to it. Overall though, I really like the strange style and the way it really feels tired and weary. It's difficult to get that across in poetry, but you succeeded, and well. The French was a bit confusing, but other than that it was a very interesting poem to read.

I adore this. I love the style.