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| Bermudian Chaos 2007-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseAw, babes! Great poem. Great guy. Never let it get you down. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. I hate to burst your bubble, but in church we were taught that angels can't be redeemed. Humans can but angels can't. That's why there are demons. Demons are fallen angels. And the devil itself is a fallen angel. If angels could be redeemed, evil spirits I think would not be as prevailant. But they are. They do exist. I think it's sad though that God allowed us to be redeemed and expects the angels to be perfect...I would hate that pressure. But your poem was lovely. Keep writing. It was very well written. I see that it's under fantasy though so I bet you didn't expect it to be real...So yeah. I'll let you go now. Bad at ending these things... |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWow sad and beautifully written. |
| Dante's Disciple 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseWow that's so sad... Really though that's an impressive set of rhymes there, almost perfect infact, though some lines could have been shortened. The story was a sad but good one to, great job! |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI think I really like this. It's not partcularly original, nor especially incredible, but I really like how the beauty fits and how the poem flows smoothly. There isn't really anything awkward, which is very impressive. You have a good blend of beauty and feeling here. It feels very complete. Good job. |