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| freaky.little.devil 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseNice imagery. So you're writing this... but as a story? Post it soon. I wanna read it! |
| Yuki Nabe 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseCrimson red a colour which creates a lot of imagination in my head. Nicely done. :) - Yuki |
| criti-sized 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI have to agree with Cirien Phoenix, for a haiku that was really good. I really like the wording, and the meaning that came across to me is really nice. The reason I say that meaning that came across to me, is because I noticed that everybody gets a different idea from reading a poem, haiku, or story than what the author means. So after all my rambling, I end it with, I really liked this haiku. C.S. |
| Cirien Phoenix 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseActually, for a haiku this was really good! The words are just perfect for the visual you're presenting because it gives blood a mystic, wonderful feeling rather than a morbid or grotesque one. ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for the review on "I Truly Love Him." Putting love into simpler terms only works sometimes, but it always leaves out so many of the important feelings involved. |
| Basara 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abusebloody nice... |
| ohthevoices 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. That image was very vivid. Actually, I liked it a lot. I hope you post more up here soon! |
| Anthony C. M. Thomas 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseNice job. Very creepy imagery. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. Intense and powerful! The imagery is horrific, but the way you've written this makes it beautiful at the same time. It has a haunting air to it, and this is a fantastic piece! I'm adding this to my favorites. Well done! |
| Ashelin 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is a bit creepy but eerily beautiful! Seriously, a lovely haiku. Just the images, and the last line was so perfect. Great job! And thank you so much for your review!! I really appreciate it. Keep up the great work! Ashelin |
| tearing hands 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery. Beautifully written! |