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| i-see-faeries 2008-06-27 ch 2, | abuseWhy is it there are more and more characters every time I read a chapter. That's not to say I don't love them though ... :D I do. I love Mackenzie and Henry for some reason. Cute beyond blief, and of course Mercer and Adir, still my favorites. Update soon, can't wait to see more of this. Loves. |
| a lost friend.. 2008-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHEATHER! OMG I MISS YOU! |
| Yuki Kara-Garasu 2008-06-11 ch 2, | abuseI have to say I've fallen in love with all of you CRDP stories, I hope you continue. |
| Sw33tR0ze 2008-04-13 ch 2, | abuseYaY! Super glad you updated! I know my review is late, I hope you keep the stories coming! Leomons top! xP |
| The-Account 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseYou make me so happy, Dark. I thought CRDP had died and been buried six feet under. Now after several months I look and BAM! I'm squeeing in my seat from happiness. Love ya! |
| chrnoskitty 2008-04-11 ch 2, | abuseLike some of the other reviewers have said, this did come off as rushed. But maybe it's because you've been stressed lately and whatnot? (Or something along those lines). I rather liked this one, but a tiny bit more explanation and characterization of "the new three" (or was it four?) would have been nice. Anyway, continue when you have the time and life's not biting your behind. ♥ |
| True.Randomness 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter was nice. It kink of sped though the a lot of the mission but it was still nice. It would have been nice to see more romance, specially Gun and Archer (my personal fave), and the whole thing be more detailed about the mission, but like I said...it was nice. |
| bambi4real 2008-04-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm so glad you decided to continue with CDRP! I loved the mission it was intense and suspenseful for all its simplicity; get home alive. Great job! |
| SiegFried 2008-04-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow this was an awesome surprise! Really glad you decided to do another chapter like this. I love reading everything you write and this was no exception~ Great chapter/case ^^V |
| Sw33tR0ze 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuse-^.^- Hope you continue! |
| True.Randomness 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, thus far the story seems really good. I really liked this case, though it was somewhat twisted at some points and rushed at the end, it brought up a lot of question on what could happen in the future. One of them is for how long are Mackency and Henry going to be on the team and how is the team going to adjust to them. I personally like them, I think that they were just hanging around the wrong crowd. It would be so cool if they could stay. This case also left me wondering about what will happen with Braxton and that Joey and if Herny and Mackency have some connection with him, since I belive somewhere it was mention they were all british. I can't wait till your next update, I am really looking forward to the next and I hope on seeing more of Gun and Arc since they are my favorite couple of them all. Thanks for the chapter! |
| merrymowmow 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Lady Psychic 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseYay! A new CRDP story! This is a really good one too! |
| alysia-moon 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI have to say i am a fan of your wonderfully writen stories. Wouldn't it be interesting if you write about merc's father or maybe a case with him involve with either helping merc or him being involve in a crime? I love to see you write more fictions. Please update soon! |
| bambi4real 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseaw, I missed my boys! That was a hot ch. |