Reviews for Dear Manufacturer

CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseI really like that, though I can't quite figure out why. It makes me think of e.e. cummings. Good job. Keep writing. Constance
perpetual questions 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abusethis perfectly captures the sadness of the moment. beautiful. favourite lines: "it tore me up and echoes of anger hunted me." -amazing
blackrosestears 2007-06-25 ch 1,	abuseThis definitely captures a feeling that I think everyone gets from time to time. I like it. Good job.
Padfoot139 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abusei liked this, short and simple, you get your feelings clear across, something that is lacking in other snipets of poetry these days. I like ur detail, it paints a picture that is clearly seen, tho i think u could have used a bit more, but thats my only critisim. btw, thnx 4 the review! new chp well b posted tommorow, thnx again and keep writting (^_^)
say this sooner 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abusewow, i loved this whole thing. the title was also great. beautiful work!
re0sakka 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abuseI felt like something darker, or sad. Nice!