|Reviews for serious immaturity|
| simpleplan13 9/21/07 . chapter 1
I like this.. its short and too the point.. very true.. nicely done
| lackluster 6/21/07 . chapter 1
i've come to like this poem. it's short but to the point. and it describes a couple situation and people i know of perfectly. well done.
| generically beautiful 6/20/07 . chapter 1
Oh man, I would LOVE to give this poem to a couple of idiotic friends of mine. However, a mean and nasty part of me would rather watch them fall on their faces. Good job summing up something so important in so few words.
| hey maria 6/18/07 . chapter 1
It feels a little choppy for some reason, but otherwise, I like it a lot. I love the connection drawn between stupidity and self-destruction; so many people don't realize that.