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Twilight Starr 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseInteresting essay. Nice comment about the fireflies. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-06-24 ch 1,	abuseI know this feeling all too well. I get home from work and I just feel burnt out. So I can completely relate to this. It's nice. Keep writing! :)
felicia13 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abuseA sort of nonsensical little thing that nevertheless conveys all the emotion it needs to. Maybe even a little more than necessary. I had to read because of the title, which is actually just a small part of the overall story. Nicely written. Fireflies rock, but Maryland rocks more. sticks tongue out I love the vague sort of almost-flashback memory towards the middle. Good for you. Felicia.
dear archimedes 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseI think this was very well written. Your first sentence, by the way, sounded very mathematical.