Interesting essay. Nice comment about the fireflies.

Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

I know this feeling all too well. I get home from work and I just feel burnt out. So I can completely relate to this. It's nice. Keep writing! :)

A sort of nonsensical little thing that nevertheless conveys all the emotion it needs to. Maybe even a little more than necessary.

I had to read because of the title, which is actually just a small part of the overall story. Nicely written.

Fireflies rock, but Maryland rocks more. *sticks tongue out*

I love the vague sort of almost-flashback memory towards the middle. Good for you.

Felicia.

I think this was very well written.

Your first sentence, by the way, sounded very mathematical.