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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseInteresting essay. Nice comment about the fireflies. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI know this feeling all too well. I get home from work and I just feel burnt out. So I can completely relate to this. It's nice. Keep writing! :) |
| felicia13 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseA sort of nonsensical little thing that nevertheless conveys all the emotion it needs to. Maybe even a little more than necessary. I had to read because of the title, which is actually just a small part of the overall story. Nicely written. Fireflies rock, but Maryland rocks more. *sticks tongue out* I love the vague sort of almost-flashback memory towards the middle. Good for you. Felicia. |
| dear archimedes 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI think this was very well written. Your first sentence, by the way, sounded very mathematical. |