Intense ending... very cool story. Very surreal, and it kept me interested the whole time.

omfg. what's wrong with those people?? O_O kayy then...i don't ever seem to pay attentinon when i'm doing something or heading some certain place, but those people are zombies. O_O lol. good summary. it lead me to this. update soon!

That was really clever. I love all the detail you put into this piece. The last few lines really wrap it up well. Excellent writing.