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Reviews For: Iris
AmethystEyes0 2009-10-25 . chapter 4
it would be adorable if when cassie proposed tom also had a ring for her
hachi9992jrn 2009-10-16 . chapter 5
awesome
i love this story
A Day Late 2007-10-24 . chapter 3
Very nice couple of chapters! And thanks for explaining more about the other characters, it's much clearer now =D
merrymowmow 2007-09-25 . chapter 1
I was wondering when you're going to update?
A Day Late 2007-06-18 . chapter 1
mm straight sex seems a little weird to me, i think i read too much slash! but regardless, it was a very nice first chapter =). my only problems were that four (i think?) other characters were mentioned, but never really explained. then again, i realize you'll introduce them later so it's not a big deal. so i guess i'm saying it might feel overwhelming at first, but it's not something you should worry about. haha pointless ramble. anyway! the other problem i had was that the first sentence was really confusing at first. i had to reread it a couple times to understand what you meant... maybe you could revise it? otherwise, great start and i can't wait for the next chapter!
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