-It certainly made it hard to do her job as the point when ever ten seconds she had to deal with her incessant nagging-
Err... It sounds kinda roundabout. I think there are two "her" subjects? It becomes clear afterwards but still.

-The girls both looked at what Sol was, and -
I know what you're sayin' here but it comes out a bit awkward. Not sure what would be best to make come out easier but I just felt like it should be pointed out.

-The small family of rats that had made themselves a burrow in the man’s stomach, feasted as if there was no new developments.-
"Were new developments"? Dunno just thought it looked weird there.

Otherwise I liked it, as expected. Happy New Year, if you celebrate it. Unattraction is coming along slowly, I'm trying to outdo the last chapter and make it longer. So yeah... also I might be writing a new one soon, for fun as well. But it's mainly gonna be adventurous. Well uhh... yeah. I'll catch you later man. Oh yeah, how were your holidays?

Nice finish!! I loved it, probably because I admire well done fight scenes and fights in general (as long as its not a retarded street fight). Oh before anything, nice name play by the way. Didn't think anyone would notice? Blitzkrieg is German for lightning war, right? A tactic used in World War 2 against England, yeah? It really matches. Moving on. At first I thought it was a mistake, but after you did it a few more times, I figured it it wasn't; you started switching up his name. I'm not sure is that's supposed to have a significance, but I assume it has something to do with his different personalities or something. Maybe the name Christian is a play on his earthly name signifying mortality, or maybe I'm just thinking too much. :) Well done, thanks for the read.

P.S.- I realized all too late that I misspelled "The City" last time, just felt like adding that. I strive for perfection!

Again, good job. I was very well written. There were no errors, as far a I could tell, but I was also pretty into the chapter so any errors that may be I glossed over. I think I see a lot of foreshadowing going on, but It's too early to tell. Still nice. Oh, before I forget! Did you read Unattraction? If so could you tell me how you think it is?

WARNING! WARNING!
You had 3 Errors! That's like... a record for you, man!
Err... let's see.

The way sound traveled to her was never a wonder anymore. He was going to try and surprise her, and if she wanted to, she could most certainly turn the tables on her
-certainly turn the tables on him.

were well aware, that his young lady had talent that was beyond her years
-his young lady? OMG she's owned!?

the moments they wished to relive what few happy
-Is there supposed to be a comma after relive?

The few people of lesser years spent, were taken to a future that they could rarely even dream of. They all were shown a world that no longer existed, but was yearned for hopelessly
-That I just don't get. Kinda, but I feel I'm missing something.

I like it. I hope you get done with Christian's description in the next chap though (Unless I'm missing someone cuz I couldn't match that name to anyone.) so I can read the better parts of the story. Nice man. Also if you let this take priority over Shadow in the Dark I'm gonna write a whole chapter insulting you! Alright, keep up the good work.

P.S.-Why didn't you just throw fortissimo in there? Or is that not applied to violins?

I ** love it. It can't believe I left such a bad review for the first chap. I feel like hippocrite sorta. Still, I like it a lot.Just one question, why didn't you try first person? Seems like it would have suited better. Either way I like it, NICE!

"Can’t say as I blame them necessarily"
-Dosent seem proper, perhaps removing the as would help?

I liked it a lot. Didn't expect that huh? I dunno something just clicked this time around. I like Oak he's cool, lol. Well, I'm gonna read Chapter 3 now. I might get even more interested.

FreeWorld wassup? How are yah? I've been waitin for you to updat Shadow in the Dark to find out you'v been working on The city. I gotta tell yah... I read the first chapter, and I was kinda disappointed. This chapter at least just didn't seem to flow as well as your other stories. The only major pert I really didn't like was the part where Gaia was picked up by Sky. Somehow, I know you were trying to display their relationship, but it would seem that there's no kinda energy or romance there.Somehow the whole scene just seemed really fake and unbelievable especially on Sky's part, might just be me. Also you might want to check the very last sentnce I didn't get it. Overall, I expected better I hope after I read the next few chapters you up your game.