That was really good!! I liked it!! ^_^ Kind of reminded me of some of the things I'm going through in my life as well.

Wow, that's REALLY good. I liked it so much.
"The hurtful things the darkness says to me." - what an awful, powerful, intriguing line. And when you talked about the darkness mocking you and telling you things.
I liked how you ended it wondering if you could listen to yourself. Such a deep poem.
Fight the darkness.