Intriging.
It reads like a rhyme without having one at all.
It is a collection of morals strung together like beaded string.

A bit eerie, in ways, yet a light and delicate feeling at the same time. I loved the repetition of "Never forget"!

Nice job - pretty much the opposite of Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken" which makes it unique and interesting. I liked it!
~deanna