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Taylary Daisuke
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseYea, yea, YEAH! Finally my finals are over and I’m free, free, free! So I decided that the first thing I should do is review all the people I owe reviews to (and they are a lot). But I figured I better review them now or the thought of it will haunt me through what little vacation time I have.

Anyways, I decided to review you first because girl, your reviews are so damn funny. I literally start laughing when I read your reviews. SO how come you don’t have a boyfriend? With your personality alone it’s a done deal. I read your profile by the way, LMFAO that was something else. Seriously, you seem like a fun person to be around with. But enough of this! I’m here to review and review I will!

*drum roll, please*

“I look into her cold brown eyes.”

^hehe, it’s perfect imagery for me because I have a picture of a girl that gets on my nerves right here so now I decided I’ll stare into her brown eyes as I read this.

Wow, I’m liking this. I’m seriously living it right now. (For you see, now I’m glaring at the picture).

Hmm, I like the pessimistic side of this. It’s really nice and makes me wish I would have thought of it. I have seriously tried to write poetry, a song, essays, etc.

^Bad idea, I suck at it.

Anyways, now I feel like I want to call the girl in the picture just to talk to her. I’m a positive person at heart so I’ll go talk to my friend even thought she easily gets on my nerves.

Really, I liked this. Write some more, will you?

Well, this is Taylary_Daisuke signing off to… read your next fic but of course.

Here I go!
psychotic aiba lover
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseWOW. i dont know how you can write that poem. its just...woah... :O that was deep. *worships you* i suck at writing poems, you rule at writing poems! :D
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