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| unknwnfuture 2007-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseOh that's sad. Really good for being so short. I wouldn't mind reading their whole story, leading up to when things slowly started to dissolve between the two. Either way, really good. |
| Sinister Slash 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this story...It's not really happy (in the beginning i guess, but that kinda leads you into a false sense of security for the end) and it's REALLY sad. Or at least I thought so. It made me cry... But i've been an emotional mess all day, so it kinda touched me more than it normally would. The last sentance really got me, I like...felt the pain, the sting, of those words. I kinda got into the characters position. Only a great writer can do that ^_~ I liked it, going in my Favs. |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat analyzation. The last line was very powerful, and kind of cynical in a satisfying way. Nice one-shot. :D |
| selkiewings 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseReally intense. Great work on the emotion. |