Beautiful.
I've never read anything like it.

I think this may be one of the very few times I read from a guy's P.O.V.
In fact,I'm so used to the P.O.V. being from a girl, that I had to go back and reread the first half because I thought that you were talking about this girl.

I'm smart,really.

Fluffy ducks haha.. I absolutey enjoyed this.. It had so much depth. I wanna write like that :(

Haha... Luv Dani

Aw! This was so cute! How he changed so much just for her because she didn't force him to. I LOVE how you show his emotions! You have real talent. I love the last line "And you're mine."

WOW!

Wow.

I loved this one-shot. The only problem I had was I couldn't tell who was the boy and who was the girl at the beginning...

But I seem to have gender-confusion problems a lot when I'm reading, so it's probably not a problem at all ;]

I loved how you wrote this...I just can't explain how, which does't do you much good now does it? I apologize.

Beautiful one-shot.

Oh I love this, absolutely love it! It evokes so many emotions from me. It's beautifully written and the plot-thing is so cute and just makes me want to go "aww." And oh I just absolutely love it!

And now I'm off to see if you have anything else to read that is written in the same style as this.

This story is just so sweet! Oh I love it!