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| Kissing Concrete 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusevery dark, i got an image of an "under-the bed" thunderstorm, where the lightning and thunder is so close it is all you can do to hide and wait for it to pass. it had a little bit of a fantasy element to it, but in a good way. good job! |
| stfnia 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was incredible. This was really incredible. I'm really glad I came across this. Thank you for writing it, it goes down and moves the core of the soul. Really great piece! I'll add it to my faves. Will be my... only fave so far =P |