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alemica 2007-12-02 ch 18,	abuseIt's nice to read something about Iris(I'm hooked on 'The Bartender Was Joking' and love her in it) This was really good!
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2007-10-21 ch 18,	abuseoh, it was cool! now i have to go read the second part (i had to read this part first, don't ask) so yeah, it was really sweet!
Trishcbury 2007-09-25 ch 1,	abusevery col.
=] 2007-08-09 ch 18, anon.	abuseOMG!! this story is AMAZING! i just love it!=D=D
lol925 2007-07-28 ch 18, anon.	abuseaw that is succh a sweet ending...i now understand the significance of the title. all these comparisons and facts and thoughts like a rose being over written i really wonder where you get your material. iris is such a thought provoking writer...and if one day years in the future if you publish something i'd like to know about it :) PM me lol...maybe i'll read it but for now i'd like to read more from u!! Grape juice is a fantabulous story.
lucid lives 2007-07-27 ch 18,	abuseIT'S DONE! oh my goodness! it was AMAZING all the way through!! Iris and Lorelei are such fantastic characters! thank you for writing this! i LOVED it!! :D keep on writing, i know i'll keep on reading!! good luck on your future pieces!
IDK My BFF Stephanie 2007-07-27 ch 18,	abuseThis was beautiful. Really. Just... it was amazing, you wrote it brilliantly. Wonderful job, one of the best pieces of fiction on this site I've ever read. Amazing job, you ended it perfectly. -Steph.
lucid lives 2007-07-24 ch 17,	abuseoh, i really, really, really loved this chapter. seeing the old iris is just great! so day-brightening! :) keep it up!
lol925 2007-07-15 ch 16,	abusehey sorry it took forev to review. that was a cute chappie. i wondered why he called her virginia. i feel like the path to healing has really finally begun for Iris. I always have been a rose lover, but i think iris's mom was right about it being overwritten. anyway...keep up the exceptional work! UPDATE!!
lucid lives 2007-07-12 ch 16,	abuseoh my goodness oh my goodness! i love it! i'm all teary eyed now! iris is by far one of the best characters i've ever read about. she's so human and it draws me in every time! L-O-V-E it! keep it up!
IDK My BFF Stephanie 2007-07-11 ch 16,	abuseBeautiful chapter. Great job. Seriously. You captured Iris perfectly, Lorelei as well. Wonderful. Update soon! -Steph.
lol925 2007-07-10 ch 15,	abuseWow! This girl's struggle to still continue on with her life through the loss of her mother is tragic but remarkable. I thought it would be from Iris's point of view but through Lorelai's it's interesting. I think Peter, Sarah, and Matt are awesome. Aidan is a complete idiot though!! I'm not really sure what i think of their dad since he doesn't seem to be a prominent character. When i first saw your story i sort of lingered over the summary thinking wheter it would be a good read but tried it and it's awesome. Watching Iris learn to live with the grief is like watching a baby learn to walk. Your chapters are a bit short, but nevertheless full of emotion. You should consider a career in writing. Please update your story!!
CR7GIRL 2007-07-09 ch 15,	abusetehehe i love iris!
IDK My BFF Stephanie 2007-07-09 ch 15,	abuseAwesome writing, I love Iris's attitude in this :D The grief group reminds me of a support group from my favorite movie (which I won't bore you with :D), and you're right, they're really the only ones who can help each other :) Great job! --Steph.
CR7GIRL 2007-07-08 ch 14,	abusesarah's such a great sister!

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