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Reviews For: Neal's Big Idea

Yours Faithfully
2008-11-12
ch 1,
wonderful but oh-so-creepy :)
Rachel
2007-06-24
ch 1,
huh? wth happened to neal? is he really crazy or is he like being controlled by aliens or something? oh yeah really good btw
you'll see
2007-06-19
ch 1,
Poor Jane. He must have changed quickly. At least she's discovered some backbone. If you were intending creepy, you achieved it.
I have to ask, though you probably won't answer. Who are they and what was Neal making with ornge peels and a glass bottle? What's the black stuff and what made the huge hole?
What would Jane have done if she wasn't pregnant?
no.holding.back.the.crooked
2007-06-19
ch 1,
I liked this very much. It was totally neat and original. Nice.
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