Reviews for Falling Away, Grace

Koki Enwai
2007-06-19
ch 1,

I was going to read all of this, but once I got to the portion that said "Chapter One", my eyes went on me. You might want to put some paragraphs in there, because it's awfully ** the eyes to read entire blocks of text like that.

But, from what I read, it's pretty good so far. Great imagery, great voice, great potential.

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