The descriptions are more appropriate to life than to a literal ocean, but in that context they are good, expressing that core of realism, contradiction. Not bad.

this piece is strangely haunting, & your descriptions are lovely. nice work. ~Bex xx

Lovely. I love the details, and basically, I love any poem involving oceans. I wrote one called the oceans song, but it's not nearly as good as yours, Yours flows smoother when read aloud. Wonderful job. Keep up the good work.