I read all the stories I was going to review for you the first day it was you turn. I don't know why I'm only now reviewing them but better late than never right? XD

I lurved this. The way you wrote it, I could really feel how much he loved her. The whole fidelity thing made it all the more sincere and sweet. Don't laugh at me but I cried a little. However, that could just be because I'm uber emotional and I cry for most things. The setting was really original. I was a little skeptical when I read the summary but you really pulled this off.

Also, the way you made the MC the alpha male of the tribe was really cool. It was like a modern day 'High School God' falls for girl and changes his ways. And I love a good cliche. You incorporated modern themes and cliches without forgetting your setting.

Really good work,
Zell.

Aha xD That was amazing. And very, very original. AND it kept my attention the -entire- way through. Mucho bueno.

Very, intersting. And different. But i luv it! and it's very well written. Multitudinous burritos of greatness! U are awesome! Update soon. Review my suckish story, "The Love of a Messenger"

hi!

thanks for reviewing my story ^^

i'll review yours too :)

lets see... I love the idea of it! It's really original, which is good :) I think the last line is a little abrupt, but the it is still really really sweet xD

(sorry about my weird obsession with ending every sentence with a smiley :P)

even if it isn't realistic...i liked it lol
update? lol
~mia

This is very creative and it made me smile the whole time i was reading it...
great work!!
i loved this!!

GOSHERS,
loved it.
could *feel* the yearning coming off the page and jumped into his arms with her.
hehe.
i'm a sucker for happy endings.
anywhos, great job. :)