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| Multicolored Berry 2007-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseIntense. Good imagery. I like the the line "blindly killing hearts and souls." People like this deserve their unhappiness, sometimes. Great job. |
| Luny Loona 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseNice poem! It describes selfishness quite well :D |
| Quantula 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's really sad... "bounce from bed to bed"... quite an image there :D I like the paragraph "Selfish girl all alone..." that was the nicest one, in my opinion Keep writing =D |