 Heroine of the Valley 2008-09-20 . chapter 7i didn't know ice cream was an aphrodisiac...hey, you forgot vanilla |
 Heroine of the Valley 2008-09-20 . chapter 4wow, that's pretty cool. roleplaying sounds fun |
 Heroine of the Valley 2008-09-20 . chapter 2nice one |
 Heroine of the Valley 2008-09-20 . chapter 1that's true |
 Susannah Simon 2008-04-12 . chapter 5haha! the last line is funny. :D
it's kind of embarrassing but this poem kinda turned me on. haha! i guess you can call it a successful poem, then, eh? i love all the description, but i'd love it even more if it were longer! post soon. i'm looking forward to seeing more poems like this one :D |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-13 . chapter 3that last line is kinda funny.. great piece |
 tangerine dreamer. 2007-06-21 . chapter 1Friends with benefits... Been there, done that, felt the same way. I can totally relate. I love the visual you get from readng it. Very nice. |