what a cute story!

Evil sister aw... lol she had her revenge, oh yeah!

“Not really. I mean he did dye my soccer uniform black the week of the championship game. Twice.”

Eric is blushing~!

I really love this and an looking quite forward to more of this story. Please do keep writing. Now i can finally write to since i have an account...

there is an Officially Offical Slash Writers Association? COOL! i wanna join! good story!

I l-u-v luv it! PURPLE! I wish i could do that.. but u know how strang i am! except the week before the band concert thing.. if i did that i would die a horriable cruel death...but not caused by my parents if you know what i mean.
well laterz!

I love slash! Great work on this too, it was so cute! Anna is one corrupted kid, you're right, but she's very amusing. You have to admit that. :P I don't know anyone in a band or choir or anything, so I wouldn't know whether it's suicide or not.. but I used to know a girl who was in band, and once I dyed her hair platinum blonde (previously she was a brunette with tan skin), and she thought it was halarious... maybe it's only where you are? Cute oneshot, love the idea.

xox Caramel

Conversation is cute and funny, well paced and realistic, but this story needs a setting and a background. I feel like i've got my ear to a door and im listening to what's going on inside a room (which would be a totally cool idea for a chapter btw), but yeah, otherwise, good job!

~Gin

:D That was cute!

That was cute.