|Reviews for Pulled Below|
| steffxnie 10/23/09 . chapter 1
No way, I think this is a great poem!
'Looking down at a lifeless body...
Realizing it was my own.'
This line is especially powerful.
The only bit I don't like is the sudden exclaimatory. It seems to break the quiet, tense atmosphere. It reveals emotions tho... well it's just my opinion. ;)
Anyway, this is one good poem, I really enjoyed it!
| walkmetoblivion 10/20/09 . chapter 1
I like how you slowly stole the life of the speaker, making the reader feel her pain, as it sucks the life outta her. I just don't think the "..."s did the poem justice though, it'd be better if you used proper punctuation. Otherwise, great job! 8D
| Pink-Amethyst 9/2/09 . chapter 1
dude! holy. freaking. crap. that was SO AWESOME! OMG!
| Aomera 6/20/07 . chapter 1
i like it, tis kinda mesmirising, a little scary! but i'm not sure about the ... at the end of each line, i find them a little distracting but maybe taht's just me. i like the ideas though, good read :)