it will probably be raining.
because things are never perfect.
i like it.

first of all- the title. second of all- you are thrown right into the poem (the descriptions are so wonderful.) and the ENDING. yes yes. the format was a bit distracting to me- but this isn't to be an **- i loved the poem despite this.

sweet. yet kinda of...nostalgic? that's probably from my own experience. nonetheless, this is really well done. great great work.

the words linger on my tongue like molasses, heavy but sweet.

I liked the use of capital letters on The Girl and Flowers, and the sort of funny/sad finality to the last lines.